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#WritingCommunity Did you use a filtering verb in your opening (see, hear, feel, watch, smell)? Eliminate it & bring your POV closer: I see a guy in a coat there and feel scared --> A guy in a long, leather coat leans against the bricks, cigarette dangling from his lips. He tips his hat. I clutch my pepper spray. #querytip

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